From 9a228e4838f8beeed02fed5242449cb26051b577 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Plailect <Plailect@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 11 May 2017 16:59:57 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] better phrasing

---
 _pages/en_US/Cart-Update.txt                  | 2 +-
 _pages/en_US/Get-Started-(New-3DS).txt        | 2 +-
 _pages/en_US/Get-Started-(Old-3DS).txt        | 2 +-
 _pages/en_US/Homebrew-Launcher-(Soundhax).txt | 2 +-
 4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/_pages/en_US/Cart-Update.txt b/_pages/en_US/Cart-Update.txt
index f233ab55d3..b1a458ac94 100644
--- a/_pages/en_US/Cart-Update.txt
+++ b/_pages/en_US/Cart-Update.txt
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ All game carts contain a copy of the required system version to play it, allowin
 
 Note that Cart Updates will only deliver updates to core features, such as the System Settings, Home Menu, etc. Cart Updates will not deliver updates to Nintendo 3DS Sound and Network features, such as System Transfer, Internet Browser, StreetPass Mii Plaza, or eShop.
 <br><br>
-This means that using a Cart Update from a version containing an older Nintendo 3DS Sound version *(<7.0.0 (EUR, USA) or <10.6.0 (JPN) or <4.0.0 (KOR))* will break [Soundhax](homebrew-launcher-(soundhax))! You will need an [alternate method](homebrew-launcher-(alternatives)) of entering the Homebrew Launcher!
+This means that using a Cart Update from a version containing an older Nintendo 3DS Sound version *(<7.0.0 (EUR, USA) or <10.6.0 (JPN) or <4.0.0 (KOR))* to one that introduced a newer Nintendo 3DS Sound version will break [Soundhax](homebrew-launcher-(soundhax))! You will need an [alternate method](homebrew-launcher-(alternatives)) of entering the Homebrew Launcher!
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diff --git a/_pages/en_US/Get-Started-(New-3DS).txt b/_pages/en_US/Get-Started-(New-3DS).txt
index 1009ea7614..1a10ccfd2a 100644
--- a/_pages/en_US/Get-Started-(New-3DS).txt
+++ b/_pages/en_US/Get-Started-(New-3DS).txt
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ For all versions you can also [Cart Update](cart-update) to a higher version in
 
 Note that Cart Updates will only deliver updates to core features, such as the System Settings, Home Menu, etc. Cart Updates will not deliver updates to Nintendo 3DS Sound and Network features, such as System Transfer, Internet Browser, StreetPass Mii Plaza, or eShop.
 <br><br>
-This means that using a Cart Update from a version containing an older Nintendo 3DS Sound version *(currently only <10.6.0 (JPN) for New 3DSs)* will break [Soundhax](homebrew-launcher-(soundhax))! You will need an [alternate method](homebrew-launcher-(alternatives)) of entering the Homebrew Launcher!
+This means that using a Cart Update from a version containing an older Nintendo 3DS Sound version *(currently only <10.6.0 (JPN) for New 3DSs)* to one that introduced a newer Nintendo 3DS Sound version will break [Soundhax](homebrew-launcher-(soundhax))! You will need an [alternate method](homebrew-launcher-(alternatives)) of entering the Homebrew Launcher!
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diff --git a/_pages/en_US/Get-Started-(Old-3DS).txt b/_pages/en_US/Get-Started-(Old-3DS).txt
index d45d0ea193..51286b8a0d 100644
--- a/_pages/en_US/Get-Started-(Old-3DS).txt
+++ b/_pages/en_US/Get-Started-(Old-3DS).txt
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ For all versions you can also [Cart Update](cart-update) to a higher version in
 
 Note that Cart Updates will only deliver updates to core features, such as the System Settings, Home Menu, etc. Cart Updates will not deliver updates to Nintendo 3DS Sound and Network features, such as System Transfer, Internet Browser, StreetPass Mii Plaza, or eShop.
 <br><br>
-This means that using a Cart Update from a version containing an older Nintendo 3DS Sound version *(<7.0.0 (EUR, USA) or <10.6.0 (JPN) or <4.0.0 (KOR))* will break [Soundhax](homebrew-launcher-(soundhax))! You will need an [alternate method](homebrew-launcher-(alternatives)) of entering the Homebrew Launcher!
+This means that using a Cart Update from a version containing an older Nintendo 3DS Sound version *(<7.0.0 (EUR, USA) or <10.6.0 (JPN) or <4.0.0 (KOR))* to one that introduced a newer Nintendo 3DS Sound version will break [Soundhax](homebrew-launcher-(soundhax))! You will need an [alternate method](homebrew-launcher-(alternatives)) of entering the Homebrew Launcher!
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diff --git a/_pages/en_US/Homebrew-Launcher-(Soundhax).txt b/_pages/en_US/Homebrew-Launcher-(Soundhax).txt
index b5a008db3a..e8cd94a3f0 100644
--- a/_pages/en_US/Homebrew-Launcher-(Soundhax).txt
+++ b/_pages/en_US/Homebrew-Launcher-(Soundhax).txt
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Ensure your device's Wireless Communication is turned on as udsploit (used in th
 
 Note that Cart Updates will only deliver updates to core features, such as the System Settings, Home Menu, etc. Cart Updates will not deliver updates to Nintendo 3DS Sound and Network features, such as System Transfer, Internet Browser, StreetPass Mii Plaza, or eShop.
 <br><br>
-This means that using a Cart Update from a version containing an older Nintendo 3DS Sound version *(<7.0.0 (EUR, USA) or <10.6.0 (JPN) or <4.0.0 (KOR))* will break [Soundhax](homebrew-launcher-(soundhax))! You will need an [alternate method](homebrew-launcher-(alternatives)) of entering the Homebrew Launcher!
+This means that using a Cart Update from a version containing an older Nintendo 3DS Sound version *(<7.0.0 (EUR, USA) or <10.6.0 (JPN) or <4.0.0 (KOR))* to one that introduced a newer Nintendo 3DS Sound version will break [Soundhax](homebrew-launcher-(soundhax))! You will need an [alternate method](homebrew-launcher-(alternatives)) of entering the Homebrew Launcher!
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