From 8f96017874e5ebf2321c00fde690defe2fd01997 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jeremy Huntwork Date: Tue, 1 Nov 2005 15:50:31 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Some grammatical corrections --- README | 2 +- jhalfs | 23 ++++++++++++----------- 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/README b/README index 78c9890..69556f9 100644 --- a/README +++ b/README @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ acts as the automation control of the commands to be run. Finally, if you have specified it to do so, and have the necessary packages available (jhalfs can download them if you need it to), it can begin and log the build process. -There are several options that jhalfs can employ, and that may be useful to +There are several options that jhalfs can employ and that may be useful to your particular needs. For a full list run: jhalfs --help diff --git a/jhalfs b/jhalfs index 7015c1a..362243e 100755 --- a/jhalfs +++ b/jhalfs @@ -27,11 +27,11 @@ Options: jhalfs produces will be in the directory DIR/jhalfs. Default is \"/mnt/lfs\". - -P, --get-packages download the packages and patches. That - depend on the server declared in the - jhalfs.conf file having the proper packages - and patches versions for the book version - being processed. + -P, --get-packages download the packages and patches. This + assumes that the server declared in the + jhalfs.conf file has the proper packages + and patches for the book version being + processed. -D, --download-client CLIENT use CLIENT as the program for retrieving packages (for use in conjunction with -P) @@ -42,17 +42,17 @@ Options: -L, --LFS-version VER ckeckout VER version of the LFS book. Supported versions at this time are: - dev* | trunk | SVN alias for Development LFS - testing | 6.1.1 alias for the testing 6.1.1 branch + dev* | trunk | SVN aliases for Development LFS + testing | 6.1.1 aliases for the testing 6.1.1 branch -T, --testsuites add support to run the optional testsuites --no-toolchain-test don't run the toolchain testsuites. This - disables also the build of TCL, Expect + also disables the build of TCL, Expect and DejaGNU --timezone TIMEZONE set TIMEZONE as the local timezone. If not - specified, Europe/London will be used. + specified, \"Europe/London\" will be used. --page_size PAGE set PAGE as the default page size (letter or A4). This setting is required to @@ -65,8 +65,9 @@ Options: created. -C, --kernel-config FILE use the kernel configuration file specified - in FILE to build the kernel. If not found, - the kernel build is skipped. + in FILE to build the kernel. If the file is + not found, or if not specified, the kernel + build is skipped. -M, --run-make run make on the generated Makefile