grammar and spelling corrections

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George Boudreau 2006-07-16 20:53:37 +00:00
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README
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6. FAQ:: 6. FAQ::
Q. "This 'help' file is very sparse"
A. Yes, it is. This tool, jhalfs, is for those who understand the LFS books
and wish to automate the build. 99% of any problems that arise can be
solved by reading the book(s).
Q. "It doesn't work!" Q. "It doesn't work!"
A. Yes it does, try ./lfs --help A. Yes it does, try ./lfs --help
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carefully and don't skip the easy parts (there are none..) carefully and don't skip the easy parts (there are none..)
Authors: Authors:
George Boudreau George Boudreau
Manuel Canales Esparcia Manuel Canales Esparcia

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@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ define echo_finished
@echo @echo
@echo -e \\t- Enter to the chroot using the command found @echo -e \\t- Enter to the chroot using the command found
@echo -e \\tin the section -Entering the Chroot Environment- @echo -e \\tin the section -Entering the Chroot Environment-
@echo -e \\texcept if building CLFS with METHOO=boot. @echo -e \\texcept if building CLFS with METHOD=boot.
@echo @echo
@echo -e \\t- Set a password for the root user. @echo -e \\t- Set a password for the root user.
@echo @echo
@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ define echo_finished
@echo -e \\tYou can set-up the host bootloader or the new boot-loader @echo -e \\tYou can set-up the host bootloader or the new boot-loader
@echo -e \\tinstalled on the new system. @echo -e \\tinstalled on the new system.
@echo -e \\tIf the last, you must to mount the virtual filesystems, re-enter @echo -e \\tIf the last, you must to mount the virtual filesystems, re-enter
@echo -e \\tto the chroot and be sure that /dev is populated with the @echo -e \\tthe chroot and be sure that /dev is populated with the
@echo -e \\trequired devices before configure the boot-loader. When ready, @echo -e \\trequired devices before configure the boot-loader. When ready,
@echo -e \\texit from the chroot and umount the filesystems @echo -e \\texit from the chroot and umount the filesystems
@echo @echo

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@ -21,8 +21,9 @@ declare -a GRAPHIC_STR="| / - \\ + "
declare -i SEC=0 # Seconds accumulator declare -i SEC=0 # Seconds accumulator
declare -i PREV_SEC=0 declare -i PREV_SEC=0
makePID=$(fuser -v . 2>&1 | grep make) mypid=$$
makePID=$(echo $makePID | cut -d" " -f2) # A small ugly.. who is my parent *not root
makePID=`(cat /proc/$mypid/stat) | cut -d " " -f5`
write_or_exit() { write_or_exit() {
# make has been killed or failed or run to completion, leave # make has been killed or failed or run to completion, leave