Small text fixes.

Placing authors in alphabetical order.

README

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ $Id$
 
      This collection of scripts, known as jhalfs-X, strives to create
   accurate makefiles from the Linux From Scratch book series XML files.
-  This software was inspired by the "jhalfs" code written by Jeremy Huntwork.
+  This software is a evolution of the original "jhalfs" code.
 
      The usage of this script assumes you have read and are familiar with
   the book(s) and therefore the configuration variables found in config files
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ $Id$
   *.  The resulting Makefile takes considerable time to run to completion,
   lay in a supply of caffeine beverages.
 
-  *.  It is recommended that you temporarily unpack your linux kernel, 
+  *.  It is recommended that you temporarily unpack your linux kernel,
   run <make menuconfig>, configure the kernal as per the book and save
   the resulting .config file. This configuration rule also applies to the
   configuration of the uClibc package when building a HLFS system using
@@ -30,22 +30,22 @@ $Id$
   as well as the common parameters file.
 
 4. RUNNING::
-     The script, master.sh, cannot be invoked directly but only via the 
+     The script, master.sh, cannot be invoked directly but only via the
   supplied symlinks. After editing the config file for the project you wish
   to build run the script.
-     <symlink> refers to the one of 4 package symlinks, lfs,hlfs,clfs,blfs. 
+     <symlink> refers to the one of 4 package symlinks, lfs,hlfs,clfs,blfs.
      Replace <symlink> with your choice.. i.e.  ./lfs
 
      ./<symlink>
-     Create a makefile based on the settings found in the config files. 
+     Create a makefile based on the settings found in the config files.
      You must enter the build partition/jhalfs directory and manually run make
 
-     ./<symlink> -G 
+     ./<symlink> -G
      Download the packages and patches necessary to build <symlink>
-     
+
      ./<symlink> -G -M
      Download the packages, create and automatically run the Makefile
-   
+
      ./<symlink> --help  will give you a context sensitive list of command
                          line switches.
 
@@ -77,5 +77,6 @@ $Id$
 
 
 Authors:
+  George Boudreau
   Manuel Canales Esparcia
-  George Boudreau
+  Jeremy Huntwork

common/common-functions

@@ -145,9 +145,9 @@ ${BOLD}  \"jhalfs-X\"${OFF} builder tool (development) \$Rev$
 
 ${BOLD}              \"${PROGNAME}\"${OFF} script module
 
-Written by Jeremy Huntwork,
+Written by George Boudreau,
            Manuel Canales Esparcia,
-           George Boudreau
+           Jeremy Huntwork
 
 This program is published under the ${BOLD}Gnu General Public License, Version 2.${OFF}
 "

common/config

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ declare -r LOG=000-masterscript.log
 declare -r HTTP=http://ftp.lfs-matrix.net/pub/lfs/conglomeration
 
 #--- Mount point for the build
-BUILDDIR=/mnt/SourceFiles
+BUILDDIR=/mnt/build_dir
 
 #--- The local repository for packages/file
 #    Any missing file will be downloaded and archived here,

common/makefile-functions

@@ -42,7 +42,8 @@ define echo_finished
   @echo the next steps:$(WHITE)
   @echo
   @echo -e \\t- Enter to the chroot using the command found
-  @echo -e \\tin the chapter -Entering the Chroot Environment-
+  @echo -e \\tin the section -Entering the Chroot Environment-
+  @echo -e \\texcept if building CLFS with METHOO=boot.
   @echo
   @echo -e \\t- Set a password for the root user
   @echo
@@ -51,7 +52,7 @@ define echo_finished
   @echo -e \\t/etc/sysconfig//network-devices/ifconfig.eth0/ipv4 and
   @echo -e \\tany other configuration file required to suit your needs.
   @echo
-  @echo -e \\t- Set-up Grub. See chapter08/grub.html
+  @echo -e \\t- Set-up the boot loader. See the relevant book section.
   @echo
   @echo -e \\t- Unmount the filesystems.
   @echo
@@ -74,7 +75,7 @@ define echo_boot_finished
   @echo
   @echo The build is not complete. Follow the next steps:$(WHITE)
   @echo
-  @echo -e \\t- Edit $(BUILDDIR)/etc/fstab
+  @echo -e \\t- Edit $(MOUNT_PT)/etc/fstab
   @echo -e \\t and any other configuration file required to suit your needs.
   @echo $(BOLD)
   @echo $(BOLD)$(YELLOW)